FEEDBACK : This looks okay although its focus more on the Suez Crisis within its international context than as part of the more specific Israeli-Palestinian conflict itself. In fact I see no indication of any examination of the Palestinian conflict as a factor here at all! A reframing of your topic to at least place it more within the context of this course is likely necessary. This need to be more reflected within your bibliography as well. Even as it stands I don’t see a clearly defined sense of argument here. What you have provided is more a statement of intention than argument.
The subject I’m taking is Palestine & Arab-Israeli Conflict so please ensure you focus on the Suez Canal but in terms of how it impacted the Israeli Palestine conflict, if you can please use in addition to the proposed sources the book of Charles Smith Tenth edition Palestine and the Arab Israeli conflict from the university of Arizona as it is the book we use in class for our lectures.